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Damn it all, I'm sick again

Bleaaaarghness! I am either recovering from being sick (and I failed to notice because of my intense motivation) or I am *getting* sick which would "suck rubber ducky eggs" as my mom says. ^.^

I played FFX-2 aaaaaaall day. Man, it's fun. Cheesy and girly in spots, but I'm happy with that. And the battles take all of 30 seconds, tops. ^.^ booya!

On a more important note (and to Jax's joy) I am going to pick up my novel from last year's NaNo and edit it. Yes, yes, I'm crazy. Get over it.

Now the biggie:
1)Does anyone who has read it remember questions/comments/criticism they had?
2)Does anyone who hasn't read it want to and give me some heavy criticism to get started on the editing?

For the #2 people... I would *really* appriciate it. Who knows, you might like some of it, especially if you like yaoi/slash/gay guys. ^.^;;; It's a 100% fantasy novel that is mostly romance, with some plot sprinkled liberally over the top. I'll give you more details if you're interested. (Or just send the thing to you. ^.^ )

Thank you, everyone!

Comments

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theeternalmind
Dec. 6th, 2003 01:33 pm (UTC)
Could I have some more details on that book? ^^
cranberrynomiko
Dec. 7th, 2003 10:31 am (UTC)
Thank you!
No problem! ^.^

First of all, I have to say this is fairly bad. It's a really rough draft.

The basic premise of the story is that this town has to give tributes to the gods every six generations. The main character is one of the tributes, and the problem is that he doesn't want to leave his best friend. Also, he has issues with most of his town because they think he's evil.

Let's see... there are gay, lesbian and straight people, if any of those offend you. There's a heavy dose of romance, but no sex.

That's the basics. If you have any questions, just ask. ^.^
theeternalmind
Dec. 7th, 2003 01:33 pm (UTC)
Ufufufu. ^^
I'm fine with all of those. ^^v What happens, story-wise?
cranberrynomiko
Dec. 7th, 2003 03:36 pm (UTC)
Re: Ufufufu. ^^
Tristian (the main character) is given as a tribute (which isn't fatal) and spends the rest of the book trying to be reunited with his boyfriend. There's a *lot* of side-plots with the gods and other tributes.

That's about it... Would you like me to send you the actual story?
theeternalmind
Dec. 7th, 2003 04:02 pm (UTC)
Send it to me when finals are over (i.e. Sunday). ^^
cranberrynomiko
Dec. 7th, 2003 05:53 pm (UTC)
Good luck on your finals!

What format would you like it in? (.rtf, .doc?)

Thank you very much. ^.^
theeternalmind
Dec. 7th, 2003 08:39 pm (UTC)
.rtf is my preferred format, thanks. ^^v And no problem, although I probably won't be able to do much in the way of critique. I'm terrible at critique. ^^;
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